Critique #3

So, we didn’t have an actual critique for this assignment, so I’ll just tell you my opinions. I really think I did a good job making straight lines that are parallel to the sides of the paper. I’ve really been trying to work on my line variation because I’ve always noticed something written about that on the back of my homework. I really think I did a pretty good job with line variation in this piece. My biggest critique to myself is that my lines aren’t very clean. Because I was making such long, straight lines, I had to correct my line a lot which created fairly sloppy lines.