Critique #2

I felt like a lot of talent was shone in this critique. Many people who had issues with line darkness in the first critique fixed it this time around which increased their drawings dramatically. I got some nice compliments on my piece. People said everything looked very proportionate and had the correct angle. I was criticized on my line variation which is something I can never get right. I promise, I try. I feel like I did a bit better on this one, but it still wasn’t quite right. I got one critique on the position of the ladder, that it should be moved to one side or the other. I personally liked where it was at, but to each their own.